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=) A smiley face a day could try to make you a little better..
The SHED THE END..
The SHED-------- crying "Such a nice story...." said crying smiley... THE END burning_eyes
*PUTS HAND OVER Rey's shoulder*
*THINKS* Yes... I did pick Will......... because I never ever had feelings for Dan....*sighs* He's my friend and will never be more than that...
FLASH BACK!!!! lol
=====DAN'S HOME=====
*Knocks on door*
*opens door*
"Dan...." *looks down*
"Hey Rey... please come in...."
"Dan I'm sorry...."
*smiles* "Rey... I don't believe you ever did anything wrong to me...."
"Now I have...." *sighs* "I didn't pick you..."
"Wah?"
"Dan...." *sighs* "I don't have feelings for you and I don't really think that you have the right to force me to choose my friends!"
*Stares*
"I'm sorry.. Dan... I you can't be anything more than a friend.... because I've know too much about you and too attached that... you're like a brother! a good brother.."
*STARES*
"I just don't feel that.... I should not pick who my friends are because... you're my best friend and that's my friend whose my hero!!"
*STARES*
"I just wish we still can be best friends......Good-bye Dan..." *walks to taxi*
-----Present well ish....--------
*THINKS* "So... that's my story of my life... but it's only the begining....."
=====NIGHT======
"Hey Will..."
"Hey Rey.."
"I'm just going to check my mail..."
"Okay..."
"Then we can go out"
*BAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*
*Turns around*
"WILL!!!!!"
*IS shot*
*Runs to Will* "Will are you okay???"
*bleeds* "Umm not really.... can't you see a hole in my body?????!!!!" *laughs*
"Will??? how can you joke at a time like this??!!?"
"Bye Rey...."
"No! Will... you're gonna be okay....." *hugs Will* "Will!!! Will!!! don't scare me.... Will?" *FEELS THAT WILL BECAME COLD AND HEAVY* *CRIES* "WILL!!!!"
}{}{}WEEKS AFTER{}{}{
In the daytime I live in my bed... in the nighttime I snuggle with his clothes.. and I never got to check my e-mail...
====One day===
My eyes were stained with salt I came and sat in the chair of the desk and I turned on the computer.... and I click on my mail box.. and then I was startled by someone behind me... I turned and I saw Will...
"Will...."
"Hey Rey you ready to go?"
"Yeah sure"
*both go out of backdoor*..........
I died......that day but... I was happy to....
*computer screen shuts down*
THE END......... and there might be another!!!!!! who knows.... oh and comment razz AND THANK YOU for reading this surprised I have thought a looong time about the ending but I got from my friend b/c she was showing this story that she drew and yes I mean drew!!!! and her ending was very beautiful and her drawings are very neat in pen lol which is wayyy better than mine lol... soo she's a great artist and I believe she should keep doing it!!!!!!! and don't let other people's drawings in her way rofl thanks so much pirate hehe... the song "Funkytown" mrgreen


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  • User Comments: [2]
    Oh... and ummm how do you think shot Will? ooooo lol and umm what was in her e-mail box? ask those questions!!!!!!! for a better effect!! gonk ok... maybe not but still it's cool for me hehe.... idea ninja burning_eyes I'm thinking for my next will be called The KITE.....or The MIRROR...... either one is good I do believe the Mirror is very short... but heres the teasers:
    The KITE----
    Gosh... I'm an adult.... and I get this house from an aunt who I never met..... It just doesn't feel right if I never ever met her.... but the craziest thing my parents say is that.... when I was 12 I went to her house.... but I never met her....
    The MIRROR------
    "Yes...yes.... I did shoot him...... because I loved her too much.... and I have loved her so much... I even plan our wedding..... now that she's dead... I feel that I deserved more...."
    "But... it's been years after her death and yet you still care?"
    "YES!!!! she was MY LIFE!!!"
    "Okay.... so is there any other problem you have?"
    "NO!! it's just her.... do you think there will be anyway for me to bring her from the dead?"
    "Well... I do know a wise doctor......."
    PLZ TELL ME HOW YOU THINK AND WHICH ONE I SHOULD DO??!!!! THANK YOU...

    comment Frogstar B · Community Member · Sun Dec 07, 2008 @ 10:06am
    AWSOME!!!! Ebony (my dog) says that you are super L33T at writing stories!!! I justed loved the ending. I was able to fully understand (because I made the words a little bigger. biggrin I hope you have an awsome thing to post next!! Write the Mirror!


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    comment WolfyDrake · Community Member · Sun Dec 07, 2008 @ 12:53pm
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