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Ramblings of a Universal Wanderer
stuff I like to rant on and stuff about my life and my thoughts.
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faded mirrors,worn and cracked,
everywhere they stand. clocks ticking
in a metronome of life,blood on the walls,roses on the floor,does anything truely exist here anymore?
black rose petals crunch under thine feet, thorns pierce the flesh from all around,
the clocks chime a tune out, telling the hour with a music box-like tone,
I stare and and look all around, where are you?
oh wait, tis the tune of the clock...is..that..all though..?
could you really be here?
coffin bed, floating castle,bats on the ceiling,
I hear your voice..! but..tis it just a trick of the mind? or could you really be here?
thorns peirce deeper and deeper, the cool refreshing blood seeps out, revitalizing the soul.
the tune grows louder and louder as the hour draws closer, my mind is filled with nothing but images of you....
could you really be here?
I cannot hold it in anymore, I begin to dance, dance,...just like that night at the ball..what a wonderous day..the thorns pertrude deeper, closer and closer to my heart, I keep dancing, hoping this heartache shall melt away,
I think of nothing but you as the melody melts my soul,
a hand reaches out and grasps mine suddenly,...
could you really be here...?


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  • User Comments: [1]
    this really is the best poem of yours I've read; it wonderful how the narrator finds hope and maintains her doubts, you don't see that in romantic poetry very often. Send this to Polaris next week.

    You're the yellow bird that I've been waiting for.- Bright Eyes

    Hark close and still what I now whisper to you
    I love you, O you entirely possess me.
    - Walt Whitman
    heart heart
    comment Splediferous Masochism · Community Member · Mon Nov 17, 2008 @ 11:45pm
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