today ish a lil story finaly dun critisis me to hard cus im making these up out off nowhere(thou i will try to include it in my book ,one i havnt talk about yet)here goes sweatdrop :
The Hero's Cry chapter ?(actualy a flash back)
as the apocalyptic meteors fell from the torch red sky only one thing rushed trough his mind "where is she" wile rushing towards the fallen body his body became heavy he couldn't feel anything his leg was bleeding to much from the bite off the dragon he couldn't make.He found strength inside to keep running no longer feeling pain like flouting on a cloud, all the voices around him becoming deaf ,his vision flicking shadows in the corner only her lying body infront,as him rushin toward the bloody body laying motionless in the floor.when he finaly reach her it was to much for a shook hes face remaind motionless slowly kneling beside her. the sword ran trough her heart. she was somehow breathing slowly just looking at our crumbled hero and weeping tears runing down her pinkish cheeks she mumble "t-take...care.." as she rised her hand slowly stoping wile the light in her eyes quickly fade away.The flashes off pictures in his eyes flew making him remember all those sweet memorys and sudendly breaking into reality he could find his voice as tears began to fall in the blood stained cloth and so the war cry spreed trought the battle field."KITSU"he called vaporising into thin air the ghost off a fox manifastate itself behind her master"yes master?"gasping realizing the terror infront off his master"what who.."quickly interruped"NOT NOW QUESTIONS LATER"not looking at the beast like ghost still kneeling"take her to the sunshine hill we will burie her there"all the ghouls and monsters aproching the blooded stain floor "OKA" a wolf like entity apeared so as the last "what now..."realising the seen "i understan master"sudendly fusing with the long thick sword that was laying down beside the masters side without any change in it. kitsu vanished with the body of the fallen maiden. Sudendly a wolf like ghoul aprouche the heros back. as suden as the ghoul aproched was the swords movement slaying in half the wolf like creature. A drak aura flikered the sword as he was standing up slowly covering him as well. our here only looked down never saying a word as he was mutilating a whole 1000 goul army
he satnding alone none by his side all his friend in sunshine hill now. and as those toughts covered foged his mind he was rushing moving the sword skillfuly slaying and mutalating the army as if they where none. He knew itt was not gona bring them back but he sudendly feel the satisfaction off slaying the helpless ghouls.
and so mecurs last stand had slain ed the remaining 1000 from the countless army of vapmal. a battle off 3 days had ended and his moust faitfull friends have died mecurs lediathans had all been destroid it took only him to stop the invasion mecur was safe but at what cost if h had only lisent to rina more often to help adna in the battle to stay with bob in lediathan to help with dash these never would have happened. at the time he couldnt help it but cry kneeling on the red stained metal droping his now heavy sword all the rage exploted at once he was tiered but he couldnt help but make another sorrowfull war cry that clinged in the mattel city.The two spirits materialised in fron off him getting close to their master helping him up"its over master"they replied to his confused face bouth in perfect harmony.he frowned and said"ITS is still alive"
end off chapter ?(actualy a flash back)
ok it became long cus i didnt know how to finish xD dunt worrie i will end the pitifull existance off our hero 3nodding maybe laterz thou xD
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