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A lil poem
When I feel all alone
i just think am i loved
should i be love
or shall i not
I am to atone
so my parents say
for being born girl
instead of boy
Yes i am alone
all alone
its cold and dark
but i still see a small light
is it something i should follow?
this bright light
is it good
will it take me to a better place
were i am not alone
i will take the dare
and follow the light
im sick of being alone
in the fright!


well this was somthing i thought about for a moment. it is a true story my parents do not love me. they wanted a boy instead of a girl to inherit the family busness. they are thinking of giving me up. i have a younger brother if i am to be given up to take over the busniess. But the light i found was a good friend. Myself. I learned to love myself.


xXxLuNar RainBowXxX
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  • User Comments: [2]
    You are too good!!!!!!!! Now this is what poetry is all about. Expressing your feelings by puting them into words, but not just any words! Beautiful compossed sentences that a reader can relate to. Brilliant!!!!!!! xd

    comment Alibis of the Heart · Community Member · Fri Jul 25, 2008 @ 01:33am
    i relate to you i need to right in my journal

    comment -o-periwinkle-o- · Community Member · Sun Jul 27, 2008 @ 05:59am
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