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Well as I'm sure everyone who read my profile knows, I'm writing poetry, I thought some of you might like to read a little bit.
Now this one I wrote forever ago, and it pretty much sucks but ahwell here it is.

Escape

I can’t escape these feelings so many times I've tried
Lost in this void of emptiness with out hope or happiness
I cling to the memory of you and your white wings
How can I live on with out seeing your smile?
When the memory of it alone brings a ting of light to my soul
Where does it reside?
The light which will make me smile
So many times I thought I have found you
Just to find out it was but a lie and it wasn’t you
With out love a man is nothing
All he has to look to is his end or his beginning
Either way there is little hope in his heart
I cannot forget that feeling the feeling I wish to have once more
I cannot describe it as an item though or a gift it is far more
It is that which guides my hands to be gentle
The reason why ill go beyond anything to find you
This feeling is called love

So well I know it sucks majorly but please leave some feedback =)