I've just written my first song...evah!
so like when I'm rich and famous...this might be worth a lot!
haha
Okay...so it's about this guy who is in love with this girl, but she's a heroin addict, and he's trying to stop her. ("did you hear my pleading?" wink
Lets see...The guy's the prince, because they used to be like upperclass sweethearts, until she got involved w/drugs.
She's become a social zombie, and keeps pushing him away...idk, can you tell that from the song?
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I'm working on the music currently. It's going to have a really slow, almost ballad, sort of somber (hehe) feeling to it.
Actually, I've decided to make it a little more..popish lol you know.
So far, I got the first verse of music finished razz
enjoy!
Princes and Zombies
I watched as your halo burned before my eyes
It wasn't just a drug,
Just your paranoid lies.
And as I'm looking down on these flowers,
I finally realize,
Did you ever really love me?
Could you hear all my pleading?
Through all of your bleeding?
This red's not just for you anymore!
The world is sad!
But who's choice was that?
How could I forgive?
When I wanted to hold on?
You kept falling,
How can this go on?
Could you hear all my pleading?
Through all of your bleeding?
This red's not just for you anymore!
The world is sad!
But who's choice was that?
I won't give up
No, I won't give it up
I won't give it up!
Till you're gone...
*Instrumental hopefully xD*
The procession was nice,
But why why'd you do it?
The letter broke my heart,
So what's it like?
Having your brains on the floor?
Could you hear all my pleading?
Through all of your bleeding?
This red's not just for you anymore!
The world is sad!
But who's choice was that?
Your voice shreds my memory
With every break I take
You haunt me still
I guess you couldn't hear me.
But what does it matter now?
I watched as your halo burned before my eyes
It wasn't just a drug,
Just your paranoid lies.
And as I'm looking down on these flowers,
I finally realize,
Did you ever really love me?
Could you hear all my pleading?
Through all of your bleeding?
This red's not just for you anymore!
The world is sad!
But who's choice was that?
How could I forgive?
When I wanted to hold on?
You kept falling,
How can this go on?
Could you hear all my pleading?
Through all of your bleeding?
This red's not just for you anymore!
The world is sad!
But who's choice was that?
I won't give up
No, I won't give it up
I won't give it up!
Till you're gone...
*Instrumental hopefully xD*
The procession was nice,
But why why'd you do it?
The letter broke my heart,
So what's it like?
Having your brains on the floor?
Could you hear all my pleading?
Through all of your bleeding?
This red's not just for you anymore!
The world is sad!
But who's choice was that?
Your voice shreds my memory
With every break I take
You haunt me still
I guess you couldn't hear me.
But what does it matter now?
Weeelll...
Um...comments?
Stuff I could get better on?
I have the most trouble on the chorus xD
