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The mansion :P
chapter 1


I took a breath and started to choke. I took another and it felt right. I sat up and opened my eyes, for a couple seconds I couldn't see, it was to dark. My eyes slowly adjusted and I stretched my back. I took in my surroundings and gasped. I was outside, sitting in a cemetery that looked like it went on for miles. I looked down at my body, which looked just fine.
My head hurt, my mind was clouded, and my mouth was dry - but I wasn't thirsty, it was very odd. I wondered where I was, because this wasn't my homes cemetery, I couldn't think of a single cemetery I had ever seen that was this big.
I stood up and shook. I was so dizzy, I felt like I had fallen hundreds of feet, but I wasn't hurt one bit, at least, not on the outside. I looked down at my feet, which still had the ballerina shoes I had been wearing.
I walked slowly off the mound of mud I was on. I looked around wondering which way I should go. I decided to go north, or what I thought was north.
There were many graves around with names I had never heard, like: Zixion Zamrock (dates: 2020 - 2040), and next to that one were two more girls I thought had to be her sisters because of the dates and last names: Diana Zamrock (dates: 2022 - 2040) and Angelina Zamrock (dates: 2015 - 2040).
I kept walking, the only other gravestones that had names as I walked were Drake Suki, Dastina Suki, Dranama Suki, Dreamer Suki, Reaper Suki, Quint Parker, Hawk Remedy, Arena may, Maximilien Grayflower And Kay Loving. All these names seemed odd to me.
I couldn't stop walking, its like my feet where possessed. Then I saw it, A mansion, a haven of warmth and rest. Now I wanted to keep walking, I moved faster, running towards it, wanting it because I was so cold it felt like my bones were frozen.
when I got to the top of the hill with all the grave stones, their was a tilt down and I realized the mansion was larger then I thought it was. It had to be at least six stories tall, if not more.
I looked down and gulped I'll fall and split my head open... I looked around and finally I found two things, the first I saw was steps heading down the hill, the second was the front door. I now realized my face was soaked with tears. I walked down the stairs and banged hard on one of the large stone doors. They came flying open, warm air came at me and I stepped inside.
"uh...er...Hello?" I said loudly.
No Answer.
"HELLO!?" I yelled.
Now I got an answer, from a man with a scratchy voice "Hello Miss Mac. Welcome to" he came closer "my world" something went into my neck. I fell to the ground, I couldn't move, I was paralyzed, I was scared.
He circled me and bowed down on one knee. I could see his leather boots that were knee high, I could see the shadow of his spiky hair that looked green, and I could see his eyes, that were gray.
he smiled and said "I win" putting his hand over my eyes. I was out cold.


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    Chapter 2

    I rolled over and sighed. I was so thirsty, but not the thirst for water or anything. The thirst for blood. I sat up and rubbed my face with my muddy hands. I covered my mouth. I wanted to barf.
    The door shifted open and a girl walked in - Her hair was waist length, blond, and in a bun. She wore a nurses uniform. Her eyes were purple. her face was thin and she had a crooked smile on her face as she started to speak "well, hello there, your finally awake. Are you comfortable? do you need anything?"
    I choked out the first thing I could think of "blood" I looked at her. and she looked at me with pity in her eyes. "ah so you've been turned" she muttered to herself trying not to let me hear, but I did.
    She turned "I'll be right back" she said shutting the door behind her. I sighed and looked at the ceiling, following the lines with my eyes until the door opened once more. I sat up faster then I had meant to, but it wasn't the girl I had seen early. This time it was a male. His face was so thin that it looked like skin had been stretched over his skeleton. His eyes were dark and his hair was long and black. He was glowing blue and green. He also wore a suit and top hat. He smiled at me "poppet..Your a vampire? how sad" he bowed to me and I looked at him lifting my eye brow.
    He reached for my hand and smiled again kissing it. I gasped and recoiled. His lips were icy, but they burnt my hand. He giggled, or at least thats what it sounded like, it was hard to tell, it was very high pitched. "your a cute one too. So what is your name? I am Maximilien Grayheart"
    I looked at him "Elli mac...pleased to meet you." He smiled and backed away as the woman came back. Her eyes turned red as she looked at him. He bowed "well, I must go" He tipped his hat and spun around.
    she walked up to me and handed me a plastic bag. it was filled with red liquid. "You'll enjoy it very much darling" I stared at it not knowing what to do. "you bite it" she said like she had read my mind. She winked and stood backing away.
    I did as she said, biting into it. The warm liquid washed over my teeth and filled my mouth. I pulled away and burped, my hands flew to my mouth "excuse me" I said blushing.
    She smiled. "oh...how rude of me...I am Quint Parker. I'm the nurse here. Though its not really needed except for new-bees like yourself."
    "new-bees?" I asked.
    The door flew open and I saw a flicker of a black trench coat. Then a loud plop next to me made me jump. I looked over to see a man smiling brightly at me. He looked strange too - his hair was blue and looked like he had just woken up. His eyes were red and his fangs were very visible when he smiled.
    "Hello love! how are you this fine dark day? Do you like it here? shall I show you around? do you need any-" he was cut off by a cough from Quint. "shes better, you can go ahead and take her around." she said looking at him with emotions I couldn't understand.
    "goody!" he shrieked hurting my ears. He pulled me out of bed and picked me up running out of the room and slamming the door behind him. He smiled "Shes a lesbian, Quint is." he said and laughed.
    He let me down and grabbed my hand "wanna see my room?" he seemed like a little kid trying to impress someone.
    "uh. sure" I said letting him drag me down the long hallway to the stair case. "we are on the sixth floor, theres one floor above us, and then down to the first floor, but then theres the basement, which we aren't allowed to go to because Phoenix lives down there with Katrina."
    "who are they?" I asked. He turned to me and laughed "oh, Phoenix is the owner of this mansion! and Katrina is his wife, we aren't sure when they died"
    "died?" I asked getting dizzy. He looked at me and dragged me down the stairs without speaking.
    We got off on the third floor and he smiled. We walked down to the end of the hall. He opened the door and let me go in first.
    The room was amazingly big. There where two beds, one in each of the far corners. The floor had a big fluffy rug that was green, the carpet was brown, the walls where blue, and the ceiling was yellow. Besides the beds, there were two desks, that had a notebook, pencil, chair, and lamp around them.
    "you should sleep in here tonight!" he said smiling.
    He sat me down on the bed and sat next to me. I looked at him, he looked serious as he pulled a cigarette out of his pocket. "you mind?" he said. "no...go ahead" I said.
    He lit it and put it to his mouth. "so, you have questions 'ay love?" he seemed older now.
    I looked at him "yeah...like...where are we?"
    He smiled and looked at me "well" he paused searching for words "to say the least we are in a mansion, in another world that no living person has ever been. Sorry if that confuses you." he paused again. "ah o.k. I got it, see, sometimes when people die, they don't die all the way, even if their bodies die, their souls aren't ready to give up and go to the next stage in the world. So, they come here, the souls that aren't ready. Like, anyone here for example. We all have our stories about how we got here"
    "whats yours?" I asked interested now.
    He laughed "well, one day, I was out late at a bar, see it was my twenty first birthday and so I decided to treat myself to something nice since in my family that was the age of manhood. So, I was walking home and saw a little girl who was being bullied and beaten up by some older men, so I decided to help her. I went over and told them to back off. But, like any bully they told me they didn't have to, it was a free country. So, we got into a fight, the little girl ran away, and well...hah...they pulled a knife on me, and next thing I knew I woke up in a room here."
    I looked at him "oh" I said. He laughed "well? questions?" he asked.
    I smiled and looked at him "well, how many other people are here?" I asked.
    He looked at the ceiling and was silent for a moment. " I think about 16?" he said. "I dunno though...want to meet hawk?" He asked smiling. "who?" I asked. "hes the doll keeper." he jumped to his feet "oh, I forgot...did I tell you my name?" I looked at him "I don't think so.."
    He smiled "its Drake Suki."

    comment Pleasure moon · Community Member · Sun Apr 27, 2008 @ 02:22am
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