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Still Teishi Stories, poems, the usual lot, if anyone cares to look anymore.


Silver Nephilim
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Two new poems. ^^

Hummingbird on the Left

Small, irridescent rainbows.
Red, blue, green, silver-white.
Fathomless black eyes
sparking near the sword of a beak.
Time-transcending
Huitzilapochtli: God of War.


First Kiss

I remember the day clearly,
if now not the date.
It felt, at least to me,
a rushed version of a movie-style first date.

We strolled around the mall,
hand in hand, smiling.
We ate well enough for our stomachs,
talking twenty-light-years per second.

Traipsed through the forest.
Nature always seems the best motif for these things.
Striding down staircase rocks,
hopping near the creek.
Crossing the stone-wood Troll's Bridge.
I trailed behind;
you called in that tone that bespoke parent, a sibling, lifelong friend,
warned of my losing my way as you took up my hand.

It was sudden.
Oddly enough, I recall the path curving here.
It was soft, but not a comparable feeling.
It spoke more, it seemed, of protection and love
than is capable of a thousand knights or 10 million sonnets.

And what do I say
when I recover my brilliant vocal faculties?
"That squirrel is staring at us."


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ChotPot
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comment Commented on: Sat Apr 26, 2008 @ 02:48am

How is it that you always know how to capture a moment perfectly?
I'm certain I will always remember that moment.
I love you.
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comment Commented on: Fri May 02, 2008 @ 12:57am
Darkness Surrounds...
Brilliant.
A good compilation, those two.
Imagery is excellent.
More! =D

...But Truth Always Prevails...



Xinith
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Orizion
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comment Commented on: Thu May 22, 2008 @ 09:30pm
You are one for words! I, on the other hand, am a silent man. That aside, your poems are excellent. Check the last line of the 3rd last paragraph

"warned of me losing my way...."
my could work, but I'm not sure how.


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