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hahaha... your mother
As I walked into the hospital a sudden coldness ran through my body. These people are in so much pain here, I thought. I walked over to the front desk and asked her what room he was in. Room 913. As I walked through the busy crowded hospital i thought about how he got here. He was out at the school with his so called "friends" earlier tonight. Smoking and drinking just to fit in. I told him not to go. He promised he wouldnt. But he did go; he even got in the car with them. Thats why hes here. They got in a wreck about three miles away from the school. They hit a SUV with a little girl and her mother in it! They died instantly. We had just started high school together and we werent as young and safe anymore. I thought we were friends! So why didnt he listen to me? I thought as I climbed onto the small, cramped, hot elevator. I was on the verge of tears just thinking about it! I got off on the 9th floor with 3 other people. I walked down the hall with my head down. I stopped in front of room 913 and looked in. No one was there. I walked in and looked at him. You could barely see his face through all the scars and bruises. I finally just broke down right there. I walked over to his bed and rested my head on the edge of his bed. Hot tears rolled down my cheeks like waterfalls. I continued to cry and cry. Suddenly I heard him talk weakly. "I'm sorry." he said,"I love you soo much! I didnt mean to put you in so much pain. I will miss you so much" I looked at him as his eyes closed. He died right there in front of my eyes! At this point the sheets were drenched and I was just bawling! I walked out as the doctors and the nurses rushed in. September 13, at 9:13 PM my bestfriend died. And Ill never be the same without him!

(This story is not true and I hope it never will be)


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  • User Comments: [3]
    that's................. that's horrible................. how can you say thing's like that ............i make me wanna cry crying

    comment yellow_the_pure_angel · Community Member · Tue Jul 26, 2005 @ 05:48am
    that is so sad I would die for a bestfriend to live again just to make him/her happy again that is so sad cry

    comment evilkoala101 · Community Member · Wed Jul 27, 2005 @ 05:50am
    dats so sad!...ur an awesome writer! when i first began to read this i thought it really happened...thank goodness it didnt... sweatdrop

    comment Akira09 · Community Member · Wed Jul 27, 2005 @ 08:09am
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