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Life As Me
here's a little something something I wrote, Please comment =D and possibly help me figure out a good title =D

Holding on to the pain I have inside.
Trying so hard to fend off the things I had once denied.
Tonight, tonight I wish my wrists were bleeding.
But you were there to stop the pain from succeeding.
You held me close, and never let go.
My tears trickle down like the falling snow.
You rub away my goose flesh.
Even though I am a big mess.
You never leave my side.
When I am taken so far away by the tides.
You come and save me.
You come and rescue me.
No longer alone, nor dealing in suffering.
We go through pain, yet it's comforting.
To know we're still human, who feel pain.
To know we're still living, who feel the rain.
To know that we can go through all these tough times.
But still make it out okay, fine.


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  • User Comments: [1]
    O.O WOW!!
    How do you write like dat?! gonk
    It's awesome!
    And a bit uplifting. =D
    Hmmm..
    I'm not so good wiff names...
    Maybe Soothing the Pain or something? >.< no, dat sucks....
    uhm.... scream scream scream scream I CAN'T THINK OF ANYTHING!!!
    Awesome poem,though. 3nodding
    Keep up da gewd work! ;D

    comment -Her Babbit- · Community Member · Wed Mar 12, 2008 @ 12:01am
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