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I hated most of the poem, and since I don't have the attention span to recompose it, here are a few stanzas that I liked. {...} means that their are parts missing.
"I watch my world wisk by me,
The thoughts dilute,
The melody gone.
Some people say their life's a book,
But no,
My life's a song.
{...}
But my song is drifting,
Over something new,
My life is shifting,
The words are gone; away they flew.
{...}
Maybe you,
Can turn my song,
Back on it's course,
Where it can belong.
Without any flaw,
Somewhere where,
this ice will thaw.
I'm falling through oblivion,
This harmony tainted and obscure,
Conceal me with the sakura,
The blossoms light and pure.
Emit the chaos and insanity,
And the hollow veil of vanity,
And leave me here to float away,
Thinking of a day ungray."
It's pretty random. The last two stanzas (in bold) have nothing to do with the rest of the poem, but they are the parts that I like the most. I know it's really dumb to post a poem without actually putting down the whole thing, but no one is actually going to read this journal, so I guess it doesn't matter.
 Mayku · Sun Feb 10, 2008 @ 08:22am · 0 Comments |
