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I'm thinking of putting my avi up to vote but I'm gonna tweak it to look like this




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And this is the description.

Living in the forest all of her life, she's gotten used to the beat of the wind. She runs through the trees and howls with the wolves. Tonight she has readied herself to vist her mothers grave. A place she hasn't been since the day the beauty was buried. Rarely does the village see her, if they do it's just a passing glipse, a whisper of golden blonde hair. She lowers herself to her knees, placing the yellow flowers on the ground, and whispers a prayer, hoping the gentle breeze will take it up to the heavens.

I'm not sure how that sounds...so I'd like comments on it if you please.


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  • User Comments: [2]
    I like it!!! Its so cool!

    comment Remedial Bunnie · Community Member · Fri Feb 08, 2008 @ 01:30am
    I like it. A lot. n_n
    The description is just enough to put a picture in your head, but vague enough so that people will have to use their imaginations a bit.
    Good luck!


    comment pppip · Community Member · Sat Feb 09, 2008 @ 01:04am
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