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this is a poem i wrote i would like to know what u think about it please

lets fly away
to a town far away
away from everyone and everything
to start a new life that would be great
but i'm stuck with the i got

so kill everyone around me
so they will maybe get their new life
and be happy
unlike me

i'll go to jail or mabe not
they might not catch me
or maybe they will just find
my body
dead or alive
i do not know
should we find out?

just try me...........