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Blackcross' Thoughts A quick heads up: I cuss as often as the wind blows, if you feel offended then get bent and leave


Virje Blackcross
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phoenix down cont.
well the story is moving along smoothly, i have been getting inspiration from my firend and gaia as well as using my friends for references and my own editors hehe, but i guess i can leave you with a little taste of what i've done so far

1st chapter

Reji had fallen asleep, he was now at peace with the drugs the doctor prescribed for the pain. He slept quietly in the dark room as the door crept open. It closed but no one was inside the room but Reji, or so it seemed. The covers slid back from over him as his chest began to glow with his Aura. His face began to sweat as his heart pulsed faster. His arm glowed with the same Aura as it began to scorch the sheets slightly. His arm began to change into the proto armor he had gathered in the fire somehow. From the biceps down was a red and black armor, the forearms were a black see-through material and the hand was a claw looking form of black, red, and silver metal.
Reji jumped up and pulled the covers off of him and............................

well that's all i can say about the story line for now, so whehn it's done you'll all know it





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Mayonaka Taiyo
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 @ 05:20pm


blaugh *sits as a little fox on his shoulder reading the book* When I read them I didn't see any errors...


Teh Ushi-ness
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Sat Jul 09, 2005 @ 05:01am


Interesting, it sounds good. ^.^ If you invite me to join I will. Otherwise I won't. Too lazy as always. -.-


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