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frdee
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 12, 2008 @ 04:30am
So this is n edited chapter. OK, There is some diolouge in there that doesn't make sense.... BUt I can't fnd t now. It was a "What do you want to eat" "NO" Type thing that just didn't work.... If that makes sense.


commentCommented on: Sat Jan 12, 2008 @ 04:38am
Uhm....no, that didn't actually make sense...there's not eating in this chapter! confused I bes confuzzled! @_@



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commentCommented on: Fri May 23, 2008 @ 06:04am
The parent's mood swing during the argument didn't seem as believable to me eek
But it does support the possibility that they don't care about Kari and are just "acting" instead.
Other than those, this chapter was okay 3nodding . Kari seems to be trusting Gabe more bit by bit. Not sure if it's a good thing or a bad thing ninja


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