I'm trying to decide on something; Purple or pink or black? One of them will be my new room colour. I can't decide which one. please help me by posting a comment! thanks!Also, i need help on this poem i am entering in my schools competition thing. We have to create a poem on DREAMS. Yeah, DREAMS. My poem isa listed down the bottom somewhere, so please can you tell me what you think! THANKS! biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin <span id="test14598173">. . .</span><br/><div id="post14598173" style="display:none; margin-right:75px;">
Feeling…empty
Seeing…nothing
Hearing…nobody
Don't cry, laugh, shout or cheer
Staring blankly at the wall ahead,
The ground, the air, there‘s nothing there,
Blot it from your memory
Erase all thoughts
Carry on as if nothing’s happened,
Don't be scared any more…
It's not real.
Sitting there alone again,
The tears stream down her face.
Shivering in the cold night air,
Trying to forget the pain.
Its still there, it doesn’t go away
Alone in this cruel world of ours,
The screams that cant be heard.
No one there to help, or notice,
No chance of being disturbed.
Pain, confusion, depression, desperation.
Every emotion ever known,
Eyes red and blurry from all the tears.
Alone in a world, facing all of her fears
Nothing but memories of what the night held
The painful reminder of the Nightmare World.Is my poem okay?</div>
senuca · Thu Oct 11, 2007 @ 07:01pm · 2 Comments
