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Still Teishi Stories, poems, the usual lot, if anyone cares to look anymore.


Silver Nephilim
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Wrote a new poem. Seems like it's been 5 millenia since the last time I wrote one. Here it is.

Ambush

Will there be no soft goodbye?
No blows rain down to extinguish a life.
Only a painfully swift strike.
No cries issue forth from the pallor form.
Only a choked, blood-spewing gag.
Screams ring.
Once a cloud of midnight,
now a miasma of nightshade.
The mantis preying upon the butterfly.
No time for a soft goodbye.


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Jace Bane
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comment Commented on: Tue Aug 28, 2007 @ 10:19pm
this is good as always tei keep it up


comment Commented on: Wed Aug 29, 2007 @ 01:15pm
Comments indeed..

This cut my soul.



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