I have to agree, where did he get the pills? lol!
I also agree that it is well written but nothing really stands out to me. Go job!
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I feel this chapter is okay so far. Nothing bad about it, but nothing that makes it stand out too much either. It's still good though.
Gabe should have told Kari of the paint sooner though so she would know to go straight to the bathroom xp ! Then the waitress wouldn't have to look at her strangely.