I made this song/poem thingy a while ago. I don't know what I wrote it about, but all I know is that I like it. Please give me your comments and suggestions on it so when I ever write again I cam make it better. Thank you.
The Questions Between Truth And Lies
Look up.
Look right.
That's the way they all look.
Look down.
Look left.
That's the way the others look,
Yet we know it's not the same.
Like looking through that hourglass,
We all wonder what it is.
But thet all truely know,
The meaning is so clear.
We still all question its exstince.
No one feels sorry for the 'questioned' ones.
Always being asked "What is it?"
"How can I use it?"
"Is it even important?"
That burden will one day be put on you.
Somewhere in my twisted reality,
I saw them all singing.
All of their songs were beautiful,
Yet scary.
Joyous,
Yet sad.
Sometime near the end of the beautifully scary singing,
I heard a voice.
This voice was somewgere far away,
Yet so close.
It helped me see through all the lies that were placed before me.
I soon found the voice to be the next lie.
That everything it said was the lie.
So what do you do when the truth comes the lie?
And the lie is still the lie?
Do you believe the truth that will soon become the lie?
All the questions still ticking,
Yet none shall never be answere,
For all of them are also the lies.
To believe the truth is the lie,
And to believe the lie is the lie.
So the hourglass will one day be the answer,
Yet it is still questioned. [END]
Yeah, that's the end. I'm sorry if I wasted your time by reading this. It is my favorite thing that I have written, but I still think it is bad.
 Starless Fall · Sun Jul 22, 2007 @ 08:58pm · 2 Comments |
