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I wrote this a few weeks ago!!!


Rigor_V
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What Will I Become?

The roads that were behind me...
they have all vanished
My path...only one road is what I see
it is to this path...that I am banished

I walk for days....with out end
I stammer forward...my muscles near defeat
Only a message....I wish to send..
but..Oh....my strength has become deplete...

Was I wrong to walk forward?
Did this choice insure my doom?
This choice...it was a double-edged sword
who would have thought...that the end would come so soon

But....can I start again?
Will the right choice...I at last choose..?
I would change my fate with my hands
Yet...what would I have left...if I lose?

Will the darkness at last prevail...
will my light...find here its end
will I grow pale under the moon so pale
will I become a blade of grass in the wind

I cast my doubts to the sea
I will just keep this pace
Let the next person who comes along...pass judgement on me
I think I have found the prize in this life race

I will not let the past....hold back my ambtion for the future
I will not regret....and be proud of what I have done
The good things I have...I will nuture...
I will embrace what I have become





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eternal crimson nite
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comment Commented on: Thu Jul 12, 2007 @ 05:16pm
COREY THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!! you did very good!!!! i want talent like yours crying you are such a great poet!!!!


comment Commented on: Thu Jul 12, 2007 @ 06:19pm
wow that was amazing!! i really like that poem.... a lot. for some reason it gave me a lot of confidence. i can't wait until these are published!!! your work is inspirational corey keep up the good work!!! biggrin



savanna1413
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2good2beforgoten
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comment Commented on: Fri Jul 13, 2007 @ 02:47am
WOW!! corey, that was really deep crying in a way sadening... crying
Once again you have done a wonderful job heart
You are so inspiring!!!! You will go far..... heart biggrin


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