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Stories or whatever. What ever i want to put in it. Simple as that.


XxMetal_UniversexX
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The Untold Story Chapter 1
This is the story w/ the submitted characters.



It was the year of the dragon in Tokyo and four kids were being born. Sakura, Ryukai, Kuro, and Elowin. These babies were cursed upon their birth with dangerous abilities. With out their parents even knowing it at all.
Eighteen years later everyone of them had grown up in Tokyo and were in their last year in High School. It was late one afternoon when something amazing happened. Kuro, short silver hair and brighter grey eyes, walked up to Elowin, Ryukai and Sakura saying," I felt something and it did not feel pleasent at all."
" We all felt it," said Sakura, whose long pink hair gave her her name.
"That's what we were talking about," said Ryukai, his hand folding his black hair neatly, easily taller than the rest of the group," it felt like a demon was being conjured again."
Elowin said," It's been the fourth one this month."
"Should we go," said Kuro, whispering as a group of people walked by," I mean we really don't need school do we?"
"But we have too."
"We'll check once were done with school. Just one more period left anyways," said Sakura," come on Ryukai we'll be late."
"Alright coming," said Ryukai waving bye at Kuro and Elowin.
As the two walked off hand in hand Kuro and Elowin walked in the opposite direction." They make a perfect couple don't they," said Elowin, fixing her bow in her hair and loosening her pendent. Which was now a deep shade of blue. Her pendent warned her and her friends of approaching trouble. Blue ment a demon was being conjured or got loose.
"Well that proves it," said Kuro, pointing at Elowin's pendent.
"Yeah this never failed us yet," responded Elowin," I'm really amazed that this belonged to my grandmother."
"It's English that we're going to right Elowin. I can never keep track."
As the day wore on the end of the period grew nearer they were thinking about what they were going to face. The bell rang and they met in the schoolyard.
"So where is it Elowin," asked Ryukai. Elowin closed her hands around her pendent and closed her eyes. A white glow appeared between her hands and warmth radiated from it.
"Its at the old Shusara building."
" Alright let's go," said Sakura.





User Comments: [7]
Megaflirt001
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Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 02:40am


thats great so far keep it up! i wonder whats going to happen next?


spawnfan911
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Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 09:47pm


you stole Sakura from Naruto and in there you said "waz", and i dont get it sad


spawnfan911
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Thu Jul 05, 2007 @ 01:30am


maybe you should change the waz part genius


my fetish
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Thu Jul 05, 2007 @ 06:24pm


its good tell me when you post more
im glad u used the characters suggested


SaraLeesdaughter
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Tue Jul 17, 2007 @ 10:28pm


Dont mind Joshy Freddy i like it so far


Zayvier
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Mon Aug 06, 2007 @ 04:41pm


Nice story's keep up the good work! xd


RandomPrincess~^_^~
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Sat Dec 08, 2007 @ 11:31pm


I like your story! ~^_^~ 3nodding


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