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I wrote this a few weeks ago!!!


Rigor_V
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I am going to add another poem...I know I told some of you that I was going to add Masquerade...but I will as soon as I get this written...July 2nd......it is my birthday....but no one in my family remembers it...they all forgot....I am hurt....that they...the ones that call themselves family...would see so little in my existence.....that I have not worth....they do not believe in me....or my writing...they think..it is a fad...and I am an immature teenager....who are they to discard my dreams?!.....Who?!.....I have never done anything but give for them...and all they do in return...is take away...life...it is a cruel joke....this is my new poem.

This day is horrible....with none in its joy
a simple little boy...playing with toys
the ones that call themselves grown
believe that our lives are something they own
we are slaves to the machine of wisdom over age
and so we are slaves....trapped with no personality...in a cage
we lose our sense of self
in THEIR quest...for richs and wealth...
what about the child with a dream
there is no hope for him it would seem
you are...what they tell you to become
if you refuse?...then they label you as stupid and dumb
I will never fail to their demands
my time I know...is close to hand
I will move forward and never look back
at the path that I walked..covered in taks...
If you know that in your heart
you have your dreams
don't let them tear them apart
I believe in you...they may not it seems
Don't forget yourself...or the hope and dreams that brought you here
if you ever need help...ask me...a friend is always near...





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savanna1413
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comment Commented on: Mon Jul 02, 2007 @ 02:07am
omg i almost cried when i read this. i feel awful right now. well.... i dunno what to say. how old are you gonna be tomorrow?? no wonder your avi isnt smiling. i thought my life was bad...well i guess i'm wrong now. the poem was good and everything, but have you ever thought about writing something positive? i mean they r all sad, and it makes me sad reading them. i just wish you would consider it, writing one wouldnt hurt ya know.


comment Commented on: Mon Jul 02, 2007 @ 03:33pm
Hey im so so so sorry crying im crying crying I can relate to this exact problem... your words are so poweful and meaningful, I love it heart this is TALENT! im so sorry again, I know wut you've been goin through... crying i've gone through this and you'll get through it heart im here crying once again I love this poem!!!!



2good2beforgoten
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2good2beforgoten
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comment Commented on: Mon Jul 02, 2007 @ 06:23pm
crying crying crying crying crying crying crying this is sooo sad crying crying crying crying
But it is also very deep and touching heart I love how you used your words This Poem I can really also relate too 4laugh This is really motivating in a way becasue of the Encouraging words!!!!! I love it keep up the talent!! heart


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