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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 17, 2007 @ 06:37pm
I really like this one too! It starts with action but I wanted to see that one scene that I told you about before told from his point of view and this skips it... Oh well! It is really good! It is definately a guy telling the story but the ending seemes a little overly dramatic (with what she says. But her actions seem fine.)


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 18, 2007 @ 02:48am
Okay, her words are explained a little more in her part of the story, so you'll have to read up to there and let me know. But she is a overly dramatic character... wink

Gabe's story is going to start way before Kari's does, so you will get to see that part, the intro is just going to be somewhere in the middle of the story, a section that can grab the reader's attention to keep them reading. I'm probably going to start the story with the part that I used as Intro #1 as the first chapter.



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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 20, 2007 @ 04:34am
Oh! OK! yay! It is such a romantic scene *sigh* ... (I know... don't make fun of me! I like to read those kinds of things. If you can't live it, read about it! lol! I crack me up!)
OK cool! I like both intros. yay! can't wait to read more. I am still typing my story and I fixed some of the first part but I'm still working on it so I'll repost it later.


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 20, 2007 @ 04:46am
I know! I love that scene! I loved writing it soooooo much! heart
Lol! Why would I make fun of you? I write those scenes so of course I like reading them too! But its hard when I've got no experience there, lol! I have to just think for long periods of time about things that I think would be really romantic!
I'm going to try to work more on Gabe's story later this week if I get time. Okay! I'll make sure to check your journal so I can read it when you get it posted!



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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 20, 2007 @ 05:22am
hehe! I know how you feel! I base mine off of things I ead and change them into what exactly I like and expand. I read enough to have an imagenation (even if I can't spell!)
yay! I love their stories! I will try to type lots! I want to see what will happen in my own story! lol!


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