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Yeah..this is where is write..sadness love..horror...peoms...how i feel and what has happened.....................post if y awanna...subscirbe,,,whatever..it doesnt matter anymore
I've started writing again.....
CHILL
A chill ran up my spine,
my whole body seemed to shiver.
As i walk down the straight line
my lips begun to quiver
I shook with alarming fear
and my hands began to shake
my eyes started to tear
and my body begun to ache
the water looked so deep
the sharks looked so frightening
I was so scared, i begun to weep
while the sky lighted up with streaks of lightening
as i took my last few steps
my life flashed before my eyes
i wondered the water dept
as i began to drown, i began to die....


is this disturbing? My Teacher said is was gonk
And yes I do write these myself...>you'll see alot more of them since I'm rather sad or depressed as you all like to call it...


This one is called.

THE END
Beep...beep...beep...beep...
the heart moniter showed my slow heart rate.
Beep...beep...beep...beep...
A slow but steady pace, showed my critical state.
Beep...beep...beep...beep...
my parents wonder and worry when I will wake
Beep...beep...beep...beep...
my body's cool now, cooled down from it's bake
Beep...beep...beep...beep...
what my parents don't know, is that i'm gong to stay this way
Beep...beep...beep...beep...
this is the end, the end of my day.
beeeeeeeeep................................


SSJMoney
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  • User Comments: [2]
    The first poem is from english class aint it? Yeah I write poems like what you write but not in school...... Only because its hard to think. I feel like I'm surrounded by a bunch of judgemental clones. Hell at lunch I put ketchup on my fries and a few people were all like "Eww! You are nso disgusting! thats way too much! ewww!!" and going on and on about the ketchup. *shakes her head* what the hell it ketchup? Plus people would be all judgemental about my poems also. Every time I hang out with this one girl around more people like 2 or 3 she starts to bring up a subject about me or some one related to me. What the hell? why am I always the subject? I have dirt on her and alot of other people but i would never use it. Thats my weak point. When people find out that I wont tell anybody about their secret they start to talk behind my back and take advantage of me because they know i wont do anything against them. See you at lunch. Spanish sucks a** xp

    comment Okami_Amaterasu · Community Member · Thu Apr 14, 2005 @ 08:48pm
    Yeah..it is.
    and yes..spanish does freakin suck

    comment SSJMoney · Community Member · Fri Apr 15, 2005 @ 12:12am
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