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Today was silence day ( my 2nd year participating). I found out ididnt get into the show i auditioned for buit thats ok i get into enough of them. anyways i started writing a stroy heres a small bit of it:

The untold story



The family ran up the stairs. Check 1. They hurried past some tourists into a hall off the side of the undergroun trainstation. Check 2. They cliocked the elevator buttom. Check 3. A tall women with dirty blonde hair and hazel eyes tapped her sneakers tip on the floor, looking down at her bare wrist as though watching the time. The elevator doors opens abruptly. The women hurried a young girl, about the age of 15 with long pure blonde hair and dazzling ice blue eyes thin and scrowny, into the elevator while a strong man, with jet black hair and green eyes, pushed th other girl , also about 15 with short brown hair and ice blue eyes , semi-short and slightly pudgy, into the elevator. Check 4. The Man pushed the "door close" button several times rushing the doors closed. Check 5. When the doors re-opend they passed many tourists who had no clue of the eeky gas system that was allowing tons of gas to flow into the corridors of the metro. The Women hailed a black taxi. Check 6. They piled into the car quickly. As they drove away the two girls looked back and watched the entire metro explode into a shower of ash and smoke. ....




So what do you think of it so far? It has a lot of grammer issues but ill work those out later anyways that all the news for now lots of luv toodles!