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I wrote this a few weeks ago!!!


Rigor_V
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The Fallen

Blossoms and trees
unheard pleas
forgive this sinner in his hour of need
I was weak and she was strong
She was right, I was wrong
I took this to heart and my mind did train
Even in nights and days consumed in rain
She always won in our duels
she never mocked me, as if by rule
I tryed harder only in vain
to succumb to my body, the endless sorce of pain.
I finally gave in, I finally knew what was true
The truth is my darling, I LOVE YOU





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prittyprincess2006
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comment Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 03:40pm
heart OMG im speechless!! I love this!!
It reaches out in a way that i cant really explain.... But this is very good!!


comment Commented on: Sat Jun 02, 2007 @ 05:22am
Yay! You're a poet and you don't even know it!
Or...maybe you do. XD



Marshie Funtime
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demon-alien1st
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comment Commented on: Sat Jun 02, 2007 @ 02:35pm
heu wiked poems is that how u spell wiked or is it wicked or wikd anyway wat did u get for english an A? i bet u did well done lol


comment Commented on: Sat Jun 02, 2007 @ 09:10pm
heart heart heart OMG!!! YOur poetry surpasses my art by far!! I love this! IT's amazing!!! heart heart heart



MixxyMoo
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2good2beforgoten
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comment Commented on: Wed Jun 27, 2007 @ 04:21pm
this is supervelous heart heart
I heart this!!!! its sooo romantic heart heart


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