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Loving you is like a soft pillow
when I'm with I get nervous
I loose my breath when I
feel your touch I think I
don't want you to let me
go my love for you is
unconditional i will never
stop loving you
Loving you is like a soft mist
I love you.
- by -x His Anqel x- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/29/2011 |
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- Title: Loving You
- Artist: -x His Anqel x-
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- Date: 11/29/2011
- Tags: loving
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- Mtodamax - 02/18/2012
- i feel that way when i'm with someone...
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- Slinkenhofer - 02/09/2012
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This just seems like a run-on sentence with a few line breaks. I couldn't even tell what was going on. Punctuation is key, even in poetry.
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