-
He gave her his heart, hoping she wouldn't break it,
He gave her his love, hoping she would love him back,
She gave him her heart, hoping he wouldn't break it,
She gave him her love, hoping he would love her back,
They loved each other the only way they knew how.
They fought and went through a lot, no longer are they dating but they still love each other to this day,
They both think that they are soul mates,
That they are meant to be together, through everything
No matter what life throws their way.
- by Dusk The Hex Girl |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/07/2011 |
- Skip
- Title: Hearts
- Artist: Dusk The Hex Girl
- Description: This is about love. That is true.
- Date: 05/07/2011
- Tags: hearts
- Report Post
Comments (4 Comments)
- Pure_Celestial_Snow - 06/09/2011
- i like the poem a lot. and i understand it. what i don't understand is if they still love each other why aren't they together?
- Report As Spam
- Apathetic Castiel - 06/08/2011
-
why are they always giving?
why can't someone take once in a while?
1/5 poorly done - Report As Spam
- Dusk The Hex Girl - 05/09/2011
- I am new to poetry. So Thank u so much for ur help. I Will fix it. I am happy for u help.
- Report As Spam
- Blush 4 me - 05/09/2011
-
first line- Have should be gave
sixth line- threw should be through
eighth line- threw should be through (again)
Over all i found this poem poorly edited. You have potential but you needed to edit this. Poetry is not written in one sitting, you have to come back to it and edit. - Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
