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(whispering)
Is this enough?
Do you care?
Is this enough?
Is this fair?
(Scream)
NO!
Live, Laugh, Die
Leave everyone
Stu-Pi-Fied
NO!
Live, Laugh, Cry
Leave everyone
Par-A-Lyzed
NO!
Live, Leave, Lie,
Leave yourself
Dead inside.
(Quick Scream)
BACK UP!
SCREAM BACK!
LEAVE THIS WORLD ON THE WRONG TRACK!
STOP
SCREAM BACK
WE'RE ALL SOILDERS
ON THE ATTACK
STOP
GET BACK
WE NEED TO GET OFF THE RIGHT TRACK
STOP
(Guitar interlude)
STOP!
(music suddenly stops)
(Whisper-screaming)
Stop
Get back
I need to leave you under attack
Stop
Fight back
We're the ones dying from lack
Of love
of air
From lack of anyone who wants to care
get back!
(High pitched womans screams) [wow lots of screaming in this song XD]
BACK UP!
SCREAM BACK!
LETS LEAVE THIS WORLD ON THE WRONG TRACK!
STOP
SCREAM BACK
WE'RE JUST SOILDERS
UNDER ATTACK
STOP
GET BACK
WE NEED TO STEP OFF THE RIGHT TRACK
STOP
(Deep voiced angry Scream)
NO MORE LIFE
IN THIS PAR-A-DISE
NO MORE SCREAMS
ITS JUST NOT ME!
NO MORE SLEEP
MY SOUL GOD WONT KEEP.
NO!
BACK UP!
SCREAM BACK!
I'll LEAVE THIS WORLD ON THE ATTACK
STOP.
SCREAM BACK
IM JUST CRAZED,
TWISTED, TORTURED AND CONFLICTED.
STOP
GET BACK
WE'RE NO LONGER WEPONS
IN FACT,
WE'RE DONE.
WE'RE JUST LIVING TIME BOMBS!
- by TrulyTwistedTeen |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/28/2011 |
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- Title: Twisted
- Artist: TrulyTwistedTeen
- Description: Okay i wrote this a few months ago and my friends urged me to send it it, so i did. The music that i had in my head when i wrote this is in vein of Disturbed. Constructive criticism and comments appreciated.
- Date: 03/28/2011
- Tags: twisted
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Kitto_Hatake_Catnip - 09/11/2013
- This is awesome! ^-^
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- kitharion - 08/11/2011
- Dude!! Just got your comment on my post, and this is brilliant!! I can totally think of a beat to put this to, and was scream-whispering my way through it (scared my sister) This is freaking amazing!!! David Draiman better freaking like this!!!
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- TrulyTwistedTeen - 06/26/2011
- To all the people who commented: I sent this song in to a lyricist agency, and they loved it! However they said they had no metal bands signed to them at the moment and if i write a song with less heavy lyrics (meaning/ the screams) /i probably will have my song published! THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR SUPPORT <3
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- Spritizzle - 04/16/2011
- Well done!
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- TrulyTwistedTeen - 04/14/2011
- Thanks people! I really appreciate the comments, i recently sent them to david draiman (lead singer of disturbed) bc i wanted his opinion... awaiting reply xD and I really like this too, once im done with other songs i'll post them up and send you people links, kk?
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- xX1Rawr1Xx - 04/13/2011
- I actually gave it a beat in my head when I started reading it. It was easy for me to get into, in other words, it was really catchy.
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- Ammiel Azarel - 03/31/2011
- Thanks for the comment. The lyrics are good for a Heavy Metal or Hard Rock song I gave u a good rating.
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