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I love the sound of your voice,
That i bearly get to hear,
I hate that you're so far,
I hate having this fear,
I love the stars at night,
They're brighter when i'm with you,
Our star is the brightest of bright,
It's ture,
I love when you call me your bad luck charm,
You say when i'm with you nothing ever goes right,
But I guess you don't mind,
Because we still kiss all night,
I hate having to say goodbye,
I hate how, that night had to turn to day,
I hate telling people im alright,
With you so far away,
Each day gets slower and slower,
I hate having to wait while you're gone,
It doesn't seem right,
Just getting by with writing poems and songs,
I love how we bearly know eachother,
You told me you loved me,
Yet theres a current pulling us together,
A current stronger than the blue sea.
- by Tiggergirl22 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/19/2010 |
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- Title: Stronger Than The Sea
- Artist: Tiggergirl22
- Description: Ahhh :[ he went into the navy (hints the stronger that the sea part) and i really miss him two days before he left he told me he loved me....
- Date: 08/19/2010
- Tags: stronger than navy
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Anistelle - 06/23/2011
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~ In the second stanza, did you mean 'lure' instead of 'ture'?
~ The fifth stanza should've started with the second line to keep the consistency of starting with 'I love...' and 'I hate...'
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- Now_I_Am_Nubia - 10/17/2010
- This poem is amazing. I wish I could write about love the way you do. Hey cheak out my jornal. I'm avrage, but I think you will like it.
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