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Roses are red
Violets are blue
I'd do anything
Just to be with you
Pansies are purple
Dahlias are black
I'll always be behind you
Just to watch your back
Lillies are white
Marigold is yellow
I don't know if I've said it
But you're a fine fellow
Morning glories are silver
Bleeding hearts are pink
At times I can't breathe
Unless it's of you that I think
- by DarkNaroays |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/18/2010 |
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- Title: Flowers of Love
- Artist: DarkNaroays
- Description: I wrote this poem for my boyfriend... It's a typical "Roses are Red" poem, but it got my point across.
- Date: 08/18/2010
- Tags: flowers love brendon lightsyaoran
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Comments (3 Comments)
- zombieeva - 11/28/2010
- Cute but typical...the first three stanzas have good flow. It's nice and simple, and it gets a point across. 2/5
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- PhoxyKat - 08/25/2010
- typical...
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- Eidolon Style - 08/23/2010
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The last stanza isn't as good as the others before it.
It lacked power, persuasion, and originality. But it had flow! 2/5 - Report As Spam
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