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I don't know how you feel
I don't know if your love is real
I don't know wich way to take
but if i could only say
becareful with the lies or truth
becareful with what you do
because maybe one day
I'll be waiting for you
- by XxX l O v E z Xx |
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- | Submitted on 06/10/2010 |
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- Title: I don't know
- Artist: XxX l O v E z Xx
- Description: i was in my car....bored well i had no idea why i did this lol but i wrote a poem and memorized it i decided 2 put it here you know what the hek lets do it so i put my poem in here art arenas :)
- Date: 06/10/2010
- Tags: dont know
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- pearness - 08/11/2012
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spelling problems- wich[which] and all of the becareful[be careful]
overall I do enjoy this poem, I would probably lose the 'maybe' towards the end of the poem. 4/5 - Report As Spam
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