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Starless Night
I saw your face last night, laying there under the starless night.
I wish it would rain just ever so light, to wash away my tears that came when I saw your face on that starless night.
I remember that fight and when it reached its height.
I fought with all my might.
I can feel it, the white pain, right there, where you damaged me.
Stars so bright hide behind clouds so dark.
To my delight, it began to rain, but only so slight.
This night would be remembered, this starless night.
With both its fright and its delight.
- by ritsuka kitty cat |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/30/2010 |
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- Title: Starless Night
- Artist: ritsuka kitty cat
- Description: another lame pome thats not really good.....idk,i was really sad that night. >writen the same night as Good Bye<
- Date: 04/30/2010
- Tags: starless night
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Comments (2 Comments)
- The Angel Dystopia - 07/10/2010
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Its a good poem and gets the idea across but the flow is sorta choppy.
When writing a poem you think of it as a song so the rythm flows so that you catch the rhyms
But other than that I liked it :3 - Report As Spam
- kino_newari - 05/03/2010
- so cool...but u really could have done better tho
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