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The fanasy she dreamed of,
Seemed impossible to her,
So she locked the door,
And blocked the light,
That made her life bright.
She said goodbye,
And then he tried to open the door,
With a rose for her in his han
To bring in the good,
That made her smile,
And made him happy.
As she said goodbye to love,
He said hello to her.
The years went bye,
And she forgot that he loved her,
She grew acosome to the dark,
That took her joy.
Untill one day,
She decided to open the door and see what was outside,
And as she did,
She saw a dead rose,
With a note that said"I love you."
But it was to late to care,
Because eventually,
He to said goodbye.
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- by BentiaSHalke |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/17/2010 |
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- Title: Goodbye"The Dead Rose Poem"
- Artist: BentiaSHalke
- Description: A poem based on my own experieces.
- Date: 02/17/2010
- Tags: hello goodbye
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Zurah - 02/20/2010
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Spellcheck is your friend. Really.
Other than that, your poem is tame and lacking insight. This has happened to you. This has happened to just about everyone, and it brings nothing interesting to the table.
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