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The nights breaths in,
And the moon let out a wailing tune,
The roses turned to dust,
As a young guy,
Laid there dying...
There's no much you can do,
To help,
But to watch her die silently,
As her world fades away,
We just stood and watch.
As the bright light shined on us,
We knew that we will lose her,
And she was our best friend,
But now's too late,
'Cause she's sadly gone forever.....
- by An Endless Amethyst Snow |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/05/2010 |
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- Title: She's Gone
- Artist: An Endless Amethyst Snow
- Description: This is dedicated to someone who've lost their bestfriends in a car crash
- Date: 01/05/2010
- Tags: shes gone
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Comments (2 Comments)
- lil cydnie - 01/09/2010
- i really liked it um...4/5 rate my poem back plz
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- Fille aux Cheveux de Lin - 01/07/2010
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The first stanza is really good. I think you can improve the rest, though.
4/5 - Report As Spam