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To be kept in the shadows,
While the chains of freedom
Shortens as my burdens grow,
My existance falls deeper
Into the forgotten realm.
But the chains are weakenig
As I struggle to be let loose
Day in ad day out.
Then I can run away from
The tightly grasping claws
Of the shadows, that
Slowly tainted my mind over
Many years.
And now here I am.
Gently drifting down
This river of never
Ending hate.
Though the chains have shattered,
More and more of them seem
To form around me.
But it doesn't matter now.
For no matter what is done
To escape the heartless shadows,
Once they have hold,
They will not let go.
I've realized that,
So now I wait for the end
Of the river, to drag me down under
To the only path of true freedom.
- by Deadlylight6 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/04/2009 |
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- Title: My True Freedom
- Artist: Deadlylight6
- Description: just oe of five poems i wrote in a day...i guess its some what like me, trying to get away from my past but realized it will never go. please, i would be grateful for comments o how to improve!
- Date: 12/04/2009
- Tags: true freedom
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Comments (1 Comments)
- ixhatexlifex - 12/05/2009
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There's nothing I see to improve here!
And usually I'm the one for heavy criticism! ^-^' - Report As Spam