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Awake and feelin clean.
Your words come out like fuses.
I don't need this I'm asleep.
Comas that I can ignore.
Block you out therefore.
I'll wait for escape.
Can you feel you voice?
I need you to shut up.
Feel some pain.
I don't need this I'm asleep.
Feel them come out like drum beats.
Screaching sounds.
You have nothing.
Stop shaking me.
Don't wake me up.
I don't need this I'm aslepp.
- by jingles2246 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/07/2009 |
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- Title: Made up Comas
- Artist: jingles2246
- Description: bocking out the world?
- Date: 11/07/2009
- Tags: made comas
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Comments (2 Comments)
- 3XRainbowCakesX3 - 07/27/2011
- lol thats me in da morning x3
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- Wicker Chair - 11/19/2009
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this has an awesome sense of rhythm.
and i love me some lyrical ambiguity. nice work. - Report As Spam