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She looked upon the rain
With gratitude
And screamed until her lungs burst
To the heavens
She announced her status
A lost angel who unknowingly stepped out the pearly gates
To her surroundings
She claimed nothing of value
And begged for re-entry
Her broken wings
Unable to carry her
beat tremendously against the harsh wind
"Take me!"
She cried.
"Take me back!"
- by Shinna Crim |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/01/2009 |
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- Title: Angel
- Artist: Shinna Crim
- Description: its a poem i wrote when i was very sad....sometime in july....my birth month and the time my only love left me.......
- Date: 10/01/2009
- Tags: angel
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Shinna Crim - 10/17/2009
- hmm thank you...what else should i add...?
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- Empress puppy - 10/13/2009
- its awesome i lerv it needs a little more to it
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- Empress puppy - 10/13/2009
- very very butifal
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- Shinna Crim - 10/01/2009
- thank you smile yes im the only one with blonde hair. my brothers have brown hair. i wonder how that was pulled off lol
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- Cougarblack - 10/01/2009
- I was born July 27, 1982 .. do you have blond hair to .. wonder if all July people have blond hair.. lately noticed that.. hmm
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- Cougarblack - 10/01/2009
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When sorrow has struck the soul is when our talents take their best form .. very emotional poem.. i liked it.. remember this ,though time has passed long since then . That there is always someone to replace the one you lost though the memories may stay with you of your last love the new love will form new memories to mend your heart .
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