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Holding her tightly,
Was but a simple soul,
A soul that meant nothing to the world,
But to him, a soul had become his.
His heart slowed in its rhythm,
Holding tightly on the edge of his life,
Firmly grasping his chest,
His breathe, unsteady.
Tears were shed under the moonlight,
A moment created in their hearts,
Leaning over onto her trembling shoulder,
Staring into her eyes, one final time,
A second went by, or was it a life time?
Time was slowing down, why didn't it just stop?
He searched for his final breath, as it escaped his lips,
Gently whispering in her ear, "我愛你".

- Title: Facebook Status
- Artist: cocobbt
- Description: I logged onto Facebook this morning and I saw my girlfriend's status, it was in chinese and translated to something like, "I want you to whisper in my ears, I Love You", from what I got out of it, it's not dead on. I get amused easily so I wrote a poem as a comment, took me like 2 minutes to pull all that out, haha. The chinese at the end says 'I Love You' by the way, just in case you didn't know.
- Date: 08/14/2009
- Tags: facebook status
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Comments (1 Comments)
- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 08/21/2009
- aw, i like it biggrin great discription through out it all xd 4/5. read minesies? smile
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