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Springs of sparkling water drift by,
And the waterfall churns my fears.
Groups of fish turn and swim away,
And take along the years.
Time doesn’t trouble me,
I’ve found a spot of paradise,
Oaks and birches from a canopy,
And keep the sun out of my eyes.
A warm wind blows towards me,
Caressing me with comfort.
Birds sing above my head,
As if they make the effort,
To calm me down,
Turn fear to lack,
So I don’t want,
To ever go back.
I want to stay forever,
Hidden beneath the trees.
And watch the river dance,
With the forest and the breeze.
- by Definition_Of_It |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/11/2009 |
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- Title: Paradise
- Artist: Definition_Of_It
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Description:
well, yeah. my first entry, so it honestly does suck :P
Comment and rate.
Oh, and read ThisIsMyDeathbed_x 's work :P She's awesome :D - Date: 08/11/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 10/18/2009
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uhhh...... oh yeah. razz
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- Definition_Of_It - 08/21/2009
- Very xd Did you notic we're having a conversation in the poetry and lyrics arena? razz
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- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 08/17/2009
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ooooh, same xd there cool, arent they?
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- Definition_Of_It - 08/13/2009
- Meteor shower, eh? i saw that too biggrin did you actuall see them? i saw, like, 4 or 5, and then it got too cloudy...
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- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 08/12/2009
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obsession.... not a bad idea... obsessed with the dead. or obsession with pain... or obsession with someone.... or all three xd
God damm it, you inspired meeeee!
And no problemz ol' buddy razz
Lmao, i re-read this msg and i'd wrote BUGGY instead of BUDDY :L
Anyways, i gtg. i'm going to watch the meteor shower, if i can see it. smile - Report As Spam
- Definition_Of_It - 08/12/2009
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OMg, you changed your name after What, sixty years of moaning about it?
And dont be jealous, you could write a happy poem if you put your mind to it, i know you can smile write about obsession razz you've got enough of that!
Anyways, thanks for the comment biggrin - Report As Spam
- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 08/12/2009
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Aaaw, you put me in the descriptionn!!!! that's shooo shweeettt! biggrin
I am very veery jealous. You never told me you could write HAPPY stuff! I can't - it's sooo not fair! - Report As Spam
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