-
You walk by,
not noticing anything,
if only you could see,
how very much I cry.
Frozen solid,
encased in stone,
if only you could see,
this golden heart of mine.
Poised in place,
eyes carved toward the heavens,
if only you could see,
how much I yearn to breath.
Just another statue,
on a lane lined with trees,
if only you could see,
me yearning to be free.
Just another statue,
made of marble and clay,
if only you could break away
enough to set me free...
- by Daughter of Elves |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/26/2009 |
- Skip

- Title: Statue
- Artist: Daughter of Elves
- Description: Another depressing poem by yours truly. AKA moi!! Comments appreciated!
- Date: 07/26/2009
- Tags: statue
- Report Post
Comments (2 Comments)
- transiti0n - 09/08/2009
- I love this one! Though the punctuation bugs me a little but great ! 5/5~! I think you should make them longer however. Keep going wink
- Report As Spam
- Kitsune_Lunami - 07/26/2009
- I love poem ^_^ Love how you're comparing yourself to a statue. Caged inside the stone, wanting to break free, but unable to do so.
- Report As Spam