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                Textured wings
 Carry the dead
 Which stare down
 From your walls.
 You trapped them here,
 Your Beloveds.
 Here, this frame,
 The fantasy ends.
 
 Dark objects
 Spill to the floor.
 She is an angel
 Shadowed by your
 Dark light.
 Whisper the painted lies.
 Your smile
 You fashioned
 From the same.
 
 Rapunzel is locked
 In a tower
 As you create
 Her future.
 Plotting, Thievery, Killing.
 After the joyful moment,
 Trapped in the chamber
 Is she with you.
 
 Pure water,
 How it washes away
 The deceiving paint.
 Now use it to paint
 Those scars
 Upon her cheeks,
 Those rosy cheeks
 You so love to paint.
 
 Terrorize
 The tender heart.
 Give her the wings
 You created for her.
 You know they're faulty
 Just like your vows.
 
 After the exhibit
 What's left to present?
 Your audience has dispersed.
 Do as you wish.
 There's no one
 To see
 Your true hues.
 While the one
 With useless wings
 Calls for the artist
 She once loved.
 
 One strike of the brush,
 Then another.
 A strike, not a stroke.
 No, you are not kind,
 You wretched deceiver.
 But devotedly she remains
 While you tear the canvas.
 She's crying,
 Begging you
 To stop the ruin.
 
 Her body
 Is ravaged
 By the one
 Who once crafted joy
 Into the bleak landscapes.
 
 You were her artist,
 You were her hero,
 You were her lover,
 And the tragic end.
 
 Once you've captured
 The likeness
 Of her beautiful form,
 You have no need of her,
 No need to endure
 Those pitiful sobs.
 The last stroke is dry,
 The last passion faded,
 And unknown to her,
 She has shed
 Her last tear.
 
 You trade your tools.
 It's a blade for a brush,
 And in sleep
 Is where she meets her end,
 Trapped forever
 In the nightmares
 You forced upon her.
 
 A startled gasp
 And you see her eyes
 One last time
 As they flutter open
 For one brief moment.
 It's the opening
 Of the butterfly's wings
 And its untimely death.
 
 You are shaken with remorse,
 For what have you done?
 You've killed the angel.
 She was all you'd hoped for.
 Now even that,
 You've stolen from yourself.
 
 You paint the landscape
 She once loved
 In grieving and hopes
 Of unmerited atonement,
 Hoping that her soul
 Will frolic there
 Among the red hills
 Instead of in the nightmares
 You banished her to.
 
 In the end
 You do not
 Stow away her portrait
 With that of the other maidens
 In the cold,
 In the dark,
 In the desolate tower
 You once locked her in.
 
 You place her portrait
 Which smiles
 Of her love for you
 Over the fireplace,
 Hoping that it might
 Provide for her the warmth
 Which you denied her
 During her life.
 
 And now,
 For your deeds
 Shall you forever weep.
 Reap the sorrow
 Of the many deaths
 Sown by your hand
 Whilst the angel
 Gazes upon
 A wasting form
 Of her lover and artist,
 Killed by his own trade.
- by Arkythiana |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/11/2009 |
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        - Title: Brushes & Blades
- Artist: Arkythiana
- Description: I was inspired to write this poem after reading Edgar Allen Poe's The Oval Portrait. I just started thinking about painters, and this was born. It really doesn't have much to do with The Oval Portrait besides the fact that it contains a painter and his lover. This also has a tragic end...
- Date: 07/11/2009
- Tags: brushes blades painter love portrait
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	        Comments (4 Comments)
			
	    
		- Hilarious Harlequinn - 07/15/2009
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						Christ. I too haven't read that particular piece by Poe, but I can say that the constant painting metaphors used made to create a great picture. In the end?
 I liked this. A lot.
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- FilloryFoxDragon - 07/14/2009
- Wow I really like this poem, I haven't read that particular Edgar Allen Poe piece, though now I think I might.
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- Arkythiana - 07/12/2009
- Thank you so much for reading and commenting! smile
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- polemarch - 07/12/2009
- This a great poem! It's hard to think of anything to say but that. It made me think too. 5/5
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