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Here she lies in a bed of blood
Riped apart by the one she loved
Holding a knife above her heart
Leting it dive as she loses her life
Painfully she crys out for help
But not makeing a sound as her soul dwels
He looks at her with passion and hate
Walking away as her heart beats one last time
For now she is breaken
Forever gone
She lost her love and made it clear
That if he wont have her...
No one will...
- by Shinigami_Blood_Rose |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/06/2009 |
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- Title: Love Kills Slowly
- Artist: Shinigami_Blood_Rose
- Description: I wrote this after my boyfriend broke up with me, 2 years ago. I was in a very bad state at that moment and was wanting to die. The poem sais it all, preety much.
- Date: 07/06/2009
- Tags: love kills slowly
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Comments (4 Comments)
- the hikage princess - 12/13/2009
- powerful...
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- ezzy111 - 12/13/2009
- wow...its..um...intense. i like it! 5/5
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- `Shangri-La - 07/07/2009
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You should probably brush up on your spelling a bit, but this is a pretty good poem.
I'd give you 4.5 if i could, but I can't.
4/5 smile - Report As Spam
- unknow virus sis - 07/06/2009
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LOVE IT, its so deep
i give 5/5 if i could give more i would - Report As Spam
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