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Do you know the temptation of death
Do you know the cold grasp of despair
Do you know the tormenting stare of depression
If you do, then you know my pain
The pain of love being ripped from my grasp
My love stolen from me in the dead of night
I hope you don't know this pain
This pain is unbearable
Inconceivable
Unimaginable
The hurt is maddening
Tormenting
Sickening
I call to your attention the cause of all this
Never take what does not belong to you
- by GuySunshine |
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- | Submitted on 07/06/2009 |
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- Title: Pain
- Artist: GuySunshine
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- Date: 07/06/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- dniam94 - 07/07/2009
- this is such a beautiful poem and i feel everything youre talking about
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- Wrath7Sins - 07/06/2009
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I understand all too well..
You are a very good poet. Better than good. You show alot of emotion in your writing and really, not so many people do anymore.
I like this because it doesn't seem like..you're trying to out-do someone or other, it just came from the heart.
I'm sorry you had to go through something like this. It's one of the worst feelings. I wouldn't wish anyone to feel like this.
I'm really sorry. It's a very good poem though. - Report As Spam
- DaT Nigguh ReDD - 07/06/2009
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it is so alwsome you r a good poet
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- iChoclaholic - 07/06/2009
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This is beautiful :'(
I feel the exact same,
I feel the pain,
It hurts ever so
You know.
If only we'd not love to soon
we still be in love in a century's noon
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good job!!!!!
any one who reads this comment, check out my stuff XD
just type in XKey To Your HeartX - Report As Spam
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