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What am i without him
His smile, his laugh
I am alone in the darkness
Wandering until
I see him again
And then
He lights up my world
- by Goddess of Forces |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/22/2009 |
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- Title: What Am I
- Artist: Goddess of Forces
- Description: Just how I feel....I know its short
- Date: 06/22/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- bindyblueeyes - 06/29/2009
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you need to add more to this
i mean its okay
but im sure you could do much better
oh and ur beat is a little off. but don't worry about that its not to bad and most people have that problem as well
um... i think i'll give it a 4/5
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- Spyceh - 06/24/2009
- It's a good start, but I feel you could go wayyy deeper with it smile If you add more feeling into it people will relate to it better. Which means they'll like it more smile
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