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- Heart of Darkness
Frolicking in pain
To withstand humanity
It drives them insane
Shrouded confusion
Endless confliction
When will it end?
They seek conviction
Harmonize with light
Always a challenge
Brink of balance
All they can manage
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- | Submitted on 06/22/2009 |
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- Title: Heart of Darkness
- Artist: revolt revolt
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Description:
A heart of darkness surrounded by.. Well, every other heart.
[I've had many people stealing my work, so please, have some decency, and at least give me some credit. Thanks.] - Date: 06/22/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Taste of a Raindrop - 06/26/2009
- This is good work. Just keep in mind that if you add punctuation, in this case the question mark, you have to treat every other sentence like that for it to work gramatically. Also, I would consider revising the rhyme challenge and manage. They don't really rhyme well. Good job. heart
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- evilangel121234 - 06/25/2009
- IM WITH DYRIN IT AWOSME, AMAZING, GREAT, ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!!!!! : )
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- Dyrin5 - 06/23/2009
- i find this totally awesome...keep writing
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