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Heart beating fast
will it last?
compare and contrast
it will soon pass
You hoped you dreamed
so perfect it seemed
until it crashed and burned
you seem oh so concerned
Soon the pieces will shatter
broken pieces that add to the clutter
your heart it splatters
it had taken all of the courage you could muster
Shot right down
your face shows no emotion
though you want to frown
you show then no notion
though the sinking feeling in your chest
makes it seem that the capability of happiness has left
could it be a test
or should you just give it a rest
The sadness will end
and soon after you won't have to pretend
like everything is perfect
and you won't even feel worthless
- by Dark_Aeris-chan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/31/2009 |
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- Title: rejected
- Artist: Dark_Aeris-chan
- Description: A poem abt rejection and what happens after(kinda) :D
- Date: 05/31/2009
- Tags: rejected
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Neon Messiah - 06/06/2009
- It's good, but I can think of a way less cliche title. "Symptoms of Rejection". I like that much better. But it's good...
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- Automatic Phail - 06/06/2009
- it's nice. rejection is hard to get over, but a break-up is WAY harder to get over. wink
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- Arobia - 06/03/2009
- It's really good
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- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 05/31/2009
- ooooo awsome! i really luv it way to go!
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