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Do you see through my mask?
You Can't I am Invisible
Do you see My Lonely heart?
No because you broke my heart many a day ago
Do you see my tears in the rain?
No because my tears are Invisible to a heart-breaker's eye
I am invisible no one sees me no one cares to see me they see right through me
They don't care at all
Why should you care at all? you don't see me after all
I am invisible
I hide in my shell all night and all day
I am oblivious to this world
I am invisible
So now if you see me for me I am no longer
Invisible.
- by xXx-PaNcAkEz-xXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/11/2009 |
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- Title: Invisible
- Artist: xXx-PaNcAkEz-xXx
- Description: This is a poem i wrote to describe my current life situations.But now i got people to see through my mask.
- Date: 05/11/2009
- Tags: invisible
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Comments (3 Comments)
- friendly_1992 - 07/30/2009
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i think this is a good poem ^^
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- Rygaen Yuui - 05/14/2009
- Bravo; be consistent w/ the flow
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- x-Immortal Despair-x - 05/11/2009
- It's lovely Rachel. I think you could make it better if you found some other words for invisible.
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