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They hang there blankly
twinkling in the night.
They've given up hope,
they can see no respite.
They hang silently
under a beam of oak.
They rock silently
their souls are revoked.
Their eyes twinkle softly
with memories of bliss.
Memories before this time
before their necks were hard and stiff.
They shed a single tear,
it slithers all the way.
It drops through the air
and splashes to dismay.
Into a dark river
forever flowing
beneath the hanged
it's never slowing.
Flowing with these tears
it rushes with might
over the glistening rock
and down where there's no light.
All the maidens' pain
flows through a river
with everyone else's,
no hope is delivered.
They shine in the sun
as it rises overhead.
They shine with hope
that they wont soon be dead.
Though they hang over death
with nothing but thoughts.
These maidens of ice
aren't hopeless, just lost.
Soon spring will come
and tears will drip more.
They will drip to the river
as life is restored,
and no one will care
as this river keeps flowing.
For it is only natural
that the tears are kept showing.
The maidens will melt
into something deserved
iced hearts into current,
their beauty preserved.
The maiden's hearts will be at rest,
they will laugh and shout,
they will dance down the falls,
their hope, they will never be without.
As they dance throughout the air
they will leave behind a symbol.
An arc of great colors.
the grief's begun to dwindle.
Though the hanged are still hanging
still cracked and destroyed
though they must not give up
the pain must be devoid.
The hanged shed tears
the tears burn their cheek
they hurt as they fall
each tear is unique.
Each tear is different.
Each pain not the same.
They dim away hope.
They fill life full of pain.
The maidens must reach out to grab
what little hope is seen,
and pull with all remaining strength,
if they want it to redeem.
Still, the hanged must sway
together in the breeze.
They must hang in the gallows,
till Spring answers their pleas
- by Ren-kunthewolf |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/05/2009 |
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- Title: The Maidens in the Gallows
- Artist: Ren-kunthewolf
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Description:
I wrote this one about the icicles I saw dangling over a river, about to be swallowed up by the inevitable waterfall up ahead. I really wanted a picture, but I didnt have my camera, so I wrote a poem about it. I hope you like it!~ :3
Me loves this one, btw.~<3 - Date: 05/05/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- What Truth - 06/30/2009
- That was beautiful...
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- Caesura Caelum - 05/14/2009
- you way with words drew the pictures in my head in itself, thank you for the wonderful poem for me to read, thanks 5/5
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