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(drum solo)
[do you think you can hold me back?]
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
you tell me...... you love me........... i tell you........ i hate you............ you tell me....... that i don't........ MEAN IIIIIIT!!!!!
YOU SHUT UP!!!!! LISTEN TO ME!!!!! SHUT UP AND LISTEN TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
(guitar solo)
[get ready]
[get ready]
[get ready to] DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(another guitar solo)
you tell me........ please stop this.......... you tell me............. don't do this........... you tell me......... you love me......... i tell you............
SHUT UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- by HHH4ever96 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/12/2009 |
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Dreaming_of_Flying - 05/09/2009
- Lol very cute. Did you make it into a song yet?
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- XxErotic_LeprosyxX - 04/14/2009
- i dont exaclty know what to critisize, its short. Very short. Never really seen a song like this. But when you extend and add more letters you may want to change the format so its like in parentheses "((extend the e sounds in a screamo fashion))" get it? ((and thats mean i know guys that are straight and write poetry))
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- HHH4ever96 - 04/12/2009
- please give criticism!
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- Carlyse13 - 04/12/2009
- Nice!
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